posted on Friday, March 14, 2008 2:43 AM by Jim

What about 'Ode to a Grecian Herm'?

Over at AOL Fanhouse, Tom Fornelli, whose other online gig is at Foul Balls, asked me to take part in the MLB poetry previews.  Being a dork, I was happy to oblige, and since Robert Frost is one of the only noteworthy people to share my birthday and his museum and gravesite are roughly 45 minutes away from here, I had to holler at my boy.

I had a couple other ideas before arriving at Frost, but couldn't see them through to completion:

1. Allen Ginsberg.
I saw the worst team of my generation
Destroyed by badness; Ozzie's hysterical
Then I forgot how the poem just kinda keeps going.

2. Walt Whitman.
O Captain! our Captain! Our fearful trip is done
The ship is now marine life reef; golf season has begun
It ultimately fits, but Paul Konerko just isn't that interesting to be the subject of three stanzas.

3. Frank O'Hara.
Mike MacDougal has collapsed!
But his style is a little too plain for parody.  The other I came close to using:

4.  William Kenny Carlos Williams.
I have traded
the arms
that were in
the minors

and which
you were probably
excited
for next year

Forgive me
I am ambitious
so daring
and so bold.
Either way, whatever I'd come up with wouldn't hold a candle to the greatest baseball poem I've seen, parody of "The Raven" that previewed the Royals' 2003 season.  Two sad facts from reading it now:

No. 1:  You could replace "Pena" with "Ozzie" and a lot of it would still work.
Not much of OPS knew he; loss of veteran pride did rue he;
Grounding to the right side knew he, was the perfect way to score.
No. 2:  Ryan Bukvich is mentioned as an underwhelming reliever five years ago.

************************

Moving away from the nerd front, a few off-day items of note:

*Toby Hall is scheduled to make his first game appearance of the season today.

*Javier Vazquez is starting the season opener instead of Mark Buehrle.  Not a fan: Warren G. Harding.

*Joe Crede is worth young, bona fide pitching to the Sox, and dreck to the Giants.  This surprises nobody.

*Kyle McCulloch is the forgotten man.

Comments

# re: What about 'Ode to a Grecian Herm'?

Friday, March 14, 2008 6:50 AM by ChicagoPete
haha - Those are pretty good, I've got to vote for the William Kenny Williams version.

# re: What about 'Ode to a Grecian Herm'?

Friday, March 14, 2008 8:45 AM by JasonC23
Well done, Jim, well done. I crown thee, Sir Dork.

"Mike MacDougal has collapsed!" is still making me laugh.

# re: What about 'Ode to a Grecian Herm'?

Friday, March 14, 2008 12:51 PM by morsetoad
these were all very excellent. It is also probably for the best that you didn't try Anne Carson

# re: What about 'Ode to a Grecian Herm'?

Sunday, March 16, 2008 4:18 AM by Jim Margalus
I can't say I'm familiar with her work.